Review Detail of Pigletr in Project Overworld

Idea is great. but authir has not done a good job potraying it. Too much random stuff and veRy unnatural. lots of things seem very hapazardLy put together because the author has a thought. Very stupid things happen which is very unecessary. and soo much that can be done is not done. Please wrote down a defLtails of an arc and then start writiNg chapters. not whatever one feels like At the moment.