Review Detail of Daoist847197 in My Loyal Heart

For a new and starter 1st novel .. the beginning of the story can be quiet thrilling... I just want to encourage u to write more chapter.. Don't listen to any negative comment about your own story.. it's your story... just take some pointer on their negative/positive comment for you to develope your own story and world.. All the best for your 1st written novel .. ♡♡♡ for other readers.. please give this new author a chances to give you all some interesting short novel.. give it a try.. u will not lose anything right.. help new author by giving ur little vote.. okay.. see ya.