Review Detail of Lil_vy in Pregnant At Seventeen Of Triplets

Story idea about teenagers who suddenly have to be ***** due to being pregnant by accident and bear the responsibilities is good. Unfortunately writing skill is a bit especially the apostrophes, which cause reader (at least for me) not having smooth reading. The way of conveying the thinking of characters is sometimes confusing as well. Suggest writer to have someone proofread the story before publishing might help. Keep it up, author.