The grammar is sh*t... Really man if you saw the anime and read the webcomic is easy to evade the typos: Illegal? Evanchel? Byekuga? Just saying few... Every time you wrote Kurosaki Jr. I though you are talking about his tool(pen*s) to be honest. He, his, she, her mixed in every paragraph I still don’t know which gender everyone is... Have someone edit this if you don’t even know the basics 😑
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