Review Detail of SnifeADoodle in New life after seventeen months / New life after seventeen months
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K I'll be honest, you need to work on your grammar, your punctuation and stop copying the same paragraphs, its annoying also make it so I understand what's going on because I donk what's what at times. Your character building is good and story development is also good as is world development but remember to have someone edit your chapters so others can understand it k? 😗😗😗
New life after seventeen months / New life after seventeen months
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It's okay just dont copy several of the same paragraphs into onw line its hard to differentiate and you shoulf make more spaces when you write a new paragraph or a text of 4 line and then make a space
Agnostos:English its not my first language,and I use Google translate!?!?!! 😭😭😭