Review Detail of phoenix_8888 in Wanted: Perfect "Daddy" Please Apply!
Review detail
In all fairness, I cannot give this story an excellent or good rating. Why? (i) the chapters are very short and choppy some of which could be combined (ii) the kid is a first class genius entitled brat - I just cannot like him at all he is not cute either especially when it reads that a lot of people accommodates his "heir" behavior (iii) I am not understanding the story nor the characters because of the choppy chapters which when you think about it the process is covering every second of an introductory meeting (iv) I am speed reading through the chapters without enjoying it which is a sign that it lacks reading hold interest and frustrates this seasoned reader. I think, I'll be struggling through this story if I go further, hence I'm dropping it. The synopsis has appeal, which is why I added it to my library but its a challenging read. Good luck author.
Wanted: Perfect "Daddy" Please Apply!
JisooHae
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I DO NOT GIVE A DAMN, SO GO LOOK FOR A STORY THAT FIT YOUR TASTE. DON'T BOTHER ME WITH YOUR CONDENSING ATTITUDE! FLOW AND PERFECT GRAMMAR YOU CAN FIND THEM ON THIS SITE, I WRITE FOR THOSE THAT CAN SEE MY VISION AND LOOK BEYOND MY LIMITATIONS. I WOULD THINK A SENSIBLE PERSON WOULD BRING UP SUGGESTION TO ASSIST THE AUTHOR RATHER THAN ACTING LIKE AN ITK!
_eunwa:Lmao talk about someone who can't handle criticism
Lmao. Authors are ashamed of having you in their circle. An eye-opener actually, I've never seen an author so stupid and irrelevant in this platform to the point where they consider everything that goes against "Good" as blatant hate. Grow up lmo
JisooHae:I DO NOT GIVE A DAMN, SO GO LOOK FOR A STORY THAT FIT YOUR TASTE. DON'T BOTHER ME WITH YOUR CONDENSING ATTITUDE! FLOW AND PERFECT GRAMMAR YOU CAN FIND THEM ON THIS SITE, I WRITE FOR THOSE THAT CAN SEE MY VISION AND LOOK BEYOND MY LIMITATIONS. I WOULD THINK A SENSIBLE PERSON WOULD BRING UP SUGGESTION TO ASSIST THE AUTHOR RATHER THAN ACTING LIKE AN ITK!
_eunwa:Lmao. Authors are ashamed of having you in their circle. An eye-opener actually, I've never seen an author so stupid and irrelevant in this platform to the point where they consider everything that goes against "Good" as blatant hate. Grow up lmo
Someone who has common sense that doesn't go asking people "Shouldn't they hElP tHe AuThOrS oUt?!" In a comment defending a person who literally just wrote out constructive criticism that could potentially help the author learn their mistakes and improve. Sadly, someone's child wasn't raised properly and doesn't understand what being "Grateful" means. Not gonna lie, just stop writing if you can't stand constructive criticism.
JisooHae:You suppose to be who?