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2020-09-07 12:19

Plot hole, plot hole, plot hole. So many times when things started but were not mentioned again after way too many chapters. Time discrepancies as well. Something will be started and paused, while paused, something else happens and the original pause will not be mentioned again. I like it, but I'm getting tired of the built up holes. Spoilers beyond as holes are mentioned. 1. What happened to the parents? (Who became the assistant/how was it felt with?) 2. The kid, what's his online story? What's his IG N/race? Did he become the assistant above? 3. The egg? The developer one from the sand scorpion. When will it hatch? Why hasn't she been checking on it or adding those whatever stones? 4. Why was the man left on the hill without his bow or any Rex meat? He must be starved by now without being able to go back to camp from embarrassment. There could have been a lot more to that quest. 5. I don't remember an announcement for the completed hidden map. Shouldn't there have been one before she turned in the rewards due to the system timer? Wouldn't it be fairly fluded with players by now? 6. Wasn't she going to head out and level up after the royal city attack? I understand she was called back by the guild leaders, but why did she only meet up with her cousin? And why didn't she leave to level up again after? 7. What happened to the sword rock place? Wasn't she looking for the attraction that was never found/mentioned in her old life due to being too difficult to walk thru and too troublesome after being able to fly? (I'm sure that there's more, I just can't tell what due to it not being as memorable/noticable.)

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