Review Detail of WaTDFuq in The Villainess Turns the Hourglass

This book has an interesting storyline but the expository kills it. The chapters have repeated info, the explanations are mostly redundant. As for the dialogues, they are plain. Conversations and actions that ought to be put in dialogue format (to flesh out the story) are jumbled into one paragraph of explanation. The pacing of the story is off, the events and processes that mc goes through are rushed. Worse, the series of events don't always happen sequentially. It becomes confusing in a chapter to mention things that happened in the duration of a previous chapter but was never mention in said previous chapter. Overall, looking at other reviews, I kind of wonder if iread a different book. Maybe I'm just over sensitive.