Review Detail of Nitpicker_Saint in Eodem: a Rifle and Sword Adventure

I’ve been following this story ever since its beginnings on wattpad, truth be told it’s the main reason I joined this platform(very happy about that decision, you guys rock). It is basically the quintessential example of story I would enjoy: military-focus, futurism/transhumanism, but also interwoven with a fairly realistic take on fantasy elements with a lovely slice of life atmosphere in some chapters. I really like the little romance between Iris and her Nightman, show us more! Few nitpicks I have are the glaring lack of droids (autonomous ground combat units, think the chariot line from Horizon: Zero Dawn game) in the UFE forces, Don Aparo has an android for crying out loud give us some real ‘Metal Demons’ for the natives to break down over and the distinct lack of directed energy weapons, ever since Kasserheim and the Corpo with the beam rifle + the Ruiner I wanted more of that. TL;DR: It’s lovely, read it! It’s FREE for crying out loud.