Review Detail of SunScar9 in My attack stat is negligible, so I can't help but rely on critical attacks to succeed

Writing Quality: The author has a grasp over language and is better than a lot of writers on the platform. But there was a lot that the author needs to learn about writing style and punctuation. There were some missing commas and tags that just didn't go, but I think with practice and reading more books, this will go away. You also need to work on showing your story to your readers. I found you in the comments clarifying matters to the readers. I want to read the images, not have you spell them out for me. Last point: you need to build more mystery. Stability of Updates: Didn't look at it, but I am happy as long as an author doesn't abandon the story. Story Development: The pace is right, but I want more information about the characters. Again... show me. Don't tell. Character design: The MC was well portrayed and I quite enjoyed reading about him. He seems like a familiar guy who has been thrown into an unknown world. I enjoyed his reactions and his subtle changes. World Background: I want to see more of the world and how the magic works. I thought that the showing of the stats was a wonderful thing but I want to learn more about how science has been replaced by magic or the spells that are being used to make the magic happen. Overall, I enjoyed this reading the story and hope the author continues. It has potential.