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the hell is this about a vug that can plunder sacred gears but will explode when he try plunder longinus and 20 chapter later he still cant plunder evrn sepiroth graal .... why dont the freaking coward of a author just make his power awaken when he become hundread years old to be able to use it.... the author only care about befreinding the cast ang go to others to make yhe plot intact ... so you dont need to read about 100 chapters or before the plot start because nothing will hreatly change and the MC still cant plunder the longinus

this could have turned out to be a good fanfic but the characteristics of the mc has let it down. he's a beta mc etc sissy like behaviour. hsh

The mc is pathetic, he has literally no pride and lets anybody and everybody walk all over him and call him anything they want. He's very weak even with his supposedly OP sacred gear and did the extremely boring and cliche thing of driving away people he loves cause he's "too weak". Over all just a terrible story with one of the worst mc's I've read about in quite a while.

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Overall its another cookie cutter wish fulfilment wuxia trash novel that does not understand the source material or how the plot or world/common sense of that world works as it ignores many different factions working in the background nope the world only works easily in favor of the mc he suddenly macgaevers whatever he needs when it is most convenient save yoursef some time and braincells this isnt even a well thought out story that flows its a Frankenstein’s monster of patched together events and happenings that get refernced to important parts/events having happened in the past that is left uneXplained in order to justify the mc having a nifty powerup or sacred gear to rescue his harem.

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Yo, i just see you write Dxd fic Here is my advice never write Dxd story by using Dxd anime as reference, Because unlike in light novel, dxd version anime ruin a lot of characters, especially Issei's characters hard to the point that reduce him into fanservice machine.

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