just before, I finished ur story..it totally marvelous ,and hookup story.l love every character , they are unique and mysterious .overall this story above my imagination, very intriguing .. but small requests ,don't kill many heart closed people,especially damson,eli etc...it gives sad devastation. ..in this story , u gives many paining moments to leads and their friends ...pls ,reduce this to ur upcoming work. any how ,it's ur creativity and I always support ur work... I love ur starcrossed lover and Money loving ceo lover is detective.......
Tea_Tae
Liked it!
LIKEThanks for the review! I'll try to keep your advice in mind but stories are driven by characters and plot. If a character needs to die then an author has no other choice but to kill them off in order to advance the story. My novels are not cookie cutting. All of them deal with life and death so there's humor but there's also tragedy. I always advise my readers to read on their own discretion ^^ Thanks again for the review ❤️