Look, I really appreciate all you works taste of darkness. Read all your fanfics, and you strike every of my kinks. As much as I actually consider getting in patriin for you, even with problems with this service in my country. But this novel Is so damn slow. Building up to actual process of sеx, is just too tedious. In chapter 12 we still hanging out on massages and mc jerking out in shadow for kinky lesbians. Even if I could appreciate building up, you writting it as smut novel. Without much of character development and give great importance in a sense of corruption and sexuality. And not giving much of actual plot or character growth. That's why I can't getting in to this everlasting blueballs of this story. Either try to make a proper story, or give readers satisfaction that they crave in you stories. Story still good, but I can't read it. I just can't...
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