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Slayerius
SlayeriusLv114yr
2021-01-22 10:30

Hello, well I tried to read this novel even though the writing quality was not good but the character design and the story development was really awful. I can cope with much but the first 4 chapters are really hard to read and understand. I was constantly thinking about how to redo it to be more comprehensive and pleasant to read and well this is not my job. I wanted to read a good story and enjoy it not be frustrated and saying "wtf why this time skip?" Or "but shouldn't we have 'explanation?". I saw worse story on webnovel but this one is for me below average and need to be edited again.

Reincarnated as a werewolf in dxd

Emmaony22
4.1
40 Chs

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free_life
free_lifeLv5

Well, I agree with you on writing quality : reading the story feels like running a 100 meters race !! plus the bad grammar.

3yr
Arxamare
ArxamareLv3

bro not everything needs a explaination we don't need a idiot mc

2yr
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Silly_Goose77
Silly_Goose77Lv11

Omg this is literally the best book I’ve read so far PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep updating

4yr

Zenfree
ZenfreeLv13

The way you write shows endless improvement and potential. From the first chapter till the last, not only has it drawn the reader in but has improved in various ways. Being 100 percent honest, I would pay to read this. For I no I wont feel dissapointed in your grammar, short chapters or slow realease cause I can see that with every chapter there disappearing. I truly hope you finish this book and continue you writing cause your good at it and like you said you enjoy it. Dont forget that feeling of joy when writing and dont hesitate or put yourself down cause your amazing and so shall your stories be. Thank you for the invested time so far and I look forward to your future achievements.

4yr
GilbertTheGreatest
GilbertTheGreatestLv15

....................................................................................... I love the main character since he has a bit of attitude

5yr
MonsterCreator
MonsterCreatorLv4

I really liked it . ..........................................................................................................................

5yr
Combo118
Combo118Lv4

Tis a reely good book so far! Keep up the good work! :) Tis a reely good book so far! Keep up the good work! :) Tis a reely good book so far! Keep up the good work! :) Tis a reely good book so far! Keep up the good work! :)

5yr
Kevin_Firefox
Kevin_FirefoxLv1

This book is amazing and should not be put down. Please continue writing............................................................ ........................................................................................... ..............................Thank you 🐺😁................................

4yr
Dillion_Carman
Dillion_CarmanLv1

Can't wait to the next chapter.

4yr
SacredGhouL
SacredGhouLLv2

Dont drop. The story line is good.. And i like the brotherhood between the MC and his pack.. Its cool.. And make his pack strong so that no one will lookdown on a Noble Werewolf Warrior

4yr
Jamir_Pollard
Jamir_PollardLv15

So far, this is one of The best werewolf books i've read So far I hope The author keeps updating. Because there's very few on web novel

1yr
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