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shnsissy
shnsissyLv44yrshnsissy

(this comments were meant for the latest chapter but it's so long so I put it here~. I will edit this review once the story is progressing, thank you.): this wang kai's love seems like bulls**t now. he couldn't stand one day being tormented with jealousy but didn't reflect on his behaviour at all. he can't even learn to win her back decently, without sabotaging, guilt tripping and such and now he gave up. did he even understand what he did wrong in their previous relationship? so willful and childish. I really pity Nini for that. she didn't deserve to be tossed around, unless she is a fool. anw, sorry for this ranting dear author 😅. I hope you don't feel offended, really 🙏🙏🙏. everyone has their typical ideal ML and mine is Detective Bai (Murder of the Dream Guy) who was an earthy and reasonable type. thus, naturally and sometimes unconsciously I will see each MLs from that tinted perspective so I can't understand Wang Kai's chara at all. He is domineering, but... childish? a bit too rational on some aspect but lacks common sense: when he dumped nini for a very thoughtful reason but failed to take nini's feeling into consideration; when he is described as cold and ruthless but there he can't even swat the flies around him, so on. also, the current relationship seems like a push and pull game in some high school romance story, though they're adults now. maybe because the readers opinion affected your storyline so much thus the character' design became so jumbled up and contradictory. It's fun so far but I hope you will take character design into account for your next novel because you've fixed the story-line for this one. wish you luck always and stay healthy~~ 💞💞💞

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Rebellious wife of President Wang

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awe thank you so much for you review, it's true, the storyline progess has gone wayyy far from what I've planned. They should've married at chapter hundred something. Most of you probrably think that I'm drag this story too much, it's because a personal matters involving contracts and etc. I hate to say this but this is not the ML and FL that I designed at first. Anyway thank you for keep supporting me as I tried to fix this story. I'm really sorry for making you and others readers disappointed.

shnsissy
shnsissyLv4shnsissy

you are too kind author-nim 😭 we're sorry too for demanding so much, really 🙇. it's within our selfish nature as a reader (we adore Xiao Ni so much we don't want her to suffer) but I hope you will not fell burdened and take it too hard. sometimes you should be a little selfish regarding your story plan and keep it in control because the story is yours. also, I've been following this story from the very start from my alt account and I can really see how the story shifted from the original plot and became a bit "too heavy". anw we will still support you till the end because Nini is a one of a kind character and I love her so much 😘

Li_Yi_Wei
Li_Yi_WeiLv15Li_Yi_Wei

Which story is Detective Bai from? Like the full title cuz when i type murder of the dream guy in wn nothing pops up