Item: Something Is Wrong With The First Young Miss
Rating: 5
Author: invayne

invayneAuthor5yr

2019-12-02 21:13

Heyo! Author here, I decided to be shameless and write a review. To start off there is no actual girl on girl action in this. (Sorry for all those who thought that was the case!) The female lead just likes to cuddle cute girls. The romance is saved for the Female Lead and Male Lead. I will say that I do rather enjoy writing this novel due to how crazy the female lead can be. Along with all the antics she gets into. So expect romance and a whole lot of comedy and plenty of face slapping in this novel. Okay, I will stop my rambling! Thanks for reading!

Something Is Wrong With The First Young Miss

invayne

4.6

154 Chs

Liked by 49 people

Replies15

XiaoJing_94Lv12

😆

5yr

AinzOoalGownLv10

SAD! 😭

4yr

e2tndgnLv5

Well I was expecting this 😂

4yr

mlv98692024Lv4

Me too 😂

e2tndgn:Well I was expecting this 😂

4yr

Kara_MarieLv12

Thank you for the clarification! Can’t wait to get started reading!

4yr

Grace_WaitheraLv1

Author I hope you are OK. I'm patiently waiting for the next chapters

4yr

brizingrLv10

Hi, may i know do you have fix schedule for new chapter? Like every Sunday, or else? Thank you

4yr

JiyaoFeng88Lv3

Hoooooo!! Thank god, it was cleared up 😂 that 'thing' almost scared me to death.😂🤣 Anyway seeing that it's a completed novel.. I really just want o cry 😂😂😂 of Happiness!!

3yr

RobloxPlayer101Lv4

Thank god its not yuri

3yr

sharon_vrushanLv4

Why?

JiyaoFeng88:Hoooooo!! Thank god, it was cleared up 😂 that 'thing' almost scared me to death.😂🤣 Anyway seeing that it's a completed novel.. I really just want o cry 😂😂😂 of Happiness!!

3yr

sharon_vrushanLv4

is it completed right?

3yr

Shaiza_AppleLv3

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😆😆😆😆😆😂😂😂😂 gonna try! looks quite like fl is energetic. .

3yr

Shaiza_AppleLv3

I love this kind of complicated novel 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

3yr

Elizabeth123Lv15

I haven't started but just wanted to say that your synopsis is by far the best I have ever read. I will start it soon. I hope I enjoy it

3yr

Mimi_AgoswaLv11

no girl love disappointed much

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