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invayne
invayneAuthor4yr
2019-12-02 21:13

Heyo! Author here, I decided to be shameless and write a review. To start off there is no actual girl on girl action in this. (Sorry for all those who thought that was the case!) The female lead just likes to cuddle cute girls. The romance is saved for the Female Lead and Male Lead. I will say that I do rather enjoy writing this novel due to how crazy the female lead can be. Along with all the antics she gets into. So expect romance and a whole lot of comedy and plenty of face slapping in this novel. Okay, I will stop my rambling! Thanks for reading!

Something Is Wrong With The First Young Miss

invayne
4.6
154 Chs

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XiaoJing_94
XiaoJing_94Lv11

😆

4yr
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AinzOoalGown
AinzOoalGownLv10

SAD! 😭

4yr
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e2tndgn
e2tndgnLv5

Well I was expecting this 😂

4yr
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mlv98692024
mlv98692024Lv4

Me too 😂

e2tndgn:Well I was expecting this 😂
4yr
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Kara_Marie
Kara_MarieLv12

Thank you for the clarification! Can’t wait to get started reading!

4yr
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Grace_Waithera
Grace_WaitheraLv1

Author I hope you are OK. I'm patiently waiting for the next chapters

4yr
2
brizingr
brizingrLv10

Hi, may i know do you have fix schedule for new chapter? Like every Sunday, or else? Thank you

4yr
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JiyaoFeng88
JiyaoFeng88Lv3

Hoooooo!! Thank god, it was cleared up 😂 that 'thing' almost scared me to death.😂🤣 Anyway seeing that it's a completed novel.. I really just want o cry 😂😂😂 of Happiness!!

3yr
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RobloxPlayer101
RobloxPlayer101Lv4

Thank god its not yuri

3yr
sharon_vrushan
sharon_vrushanLv4

Why?

JiyaoFeng88:Hoooooo!! Thank god, it was cleared up 😂 that 'thing' almost scared me to death.😂🤣 Anyway seeing that it's a completed novel.. I really just want o cry 😂😂😂 of Happiness!!
3yr
sharon_vrushan
sharon_vrushanLv4

is it completed right?

3yr
Shaiza_Apple
Shaiza_AppleLv3

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😆😆😆😆😆😂😂😂😂 gonna try! looks quite like fl is energetic. .

3yr
Shaiza_Apple
Shaiza_AppleLv3

I love this kind of complicated novel 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

3yr
Elizabeth123
Elizabeth123Lv15

I haven't started but just wanted to say that your synopsis is by far the best I have ever read. I will start it soon. I hope I enjoy it

2yr
Mimi_Agoswa
Mimi_AgoswaLv11

no girl love disappointed much

9d
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PyaariMehak
PyaariMehakLv4

To be honest if someone wants me to recommend some novel then this will be the one because I loved it very much. Even of I have read so many other novels about reincarnation,this one is outstanding the others. I would like to give my regards to the author for creating this amazing novel😍🥰🥰

4yr

ranimah
ranimahLv15

The story is getting better and better. The characters building are aweldone. The story line is getting better and better. The story plots I am looking forward to your good work 😍

4yr
storm8967
storm8967Lv15

This story is entertaining. The story is both common and different at the same time. I enjoy the humor and shamelessness. The connection between the FL and ML is great. Looking forward to the development of the story. So far the author is doing a great job.

4yr
wynema01
wynema01Lv14

I cannot finish reading this book, it is just too vulgar. There are so many satisfying ways to get revenge, but this author loves sexually harassing the characters. I am out of here!

2yr
alice_taylor
alice_taylorLv4

Love it ............ Love shameless bragging and content so amazing .......... Love those moments between MO and FL ......... waiting for their marriage and her counter attack on her family

4yr
MaskedWitch16
MaskedWitch16Lv13

I like it because it's not like the other webnovels, it's not the same plot as always, this is a funny story without all the roundabout ways of getting revenge.

4yr
Krazy
KrazyLv15

I love this bOok. It made me pull 2 All Nighters to read this book. I like how she got back at people who pick on her. She learn to forgive and love her man.

3yr
nicolericky
nicolerickyLv10

this book was so good that I had a very hard time going to bed because it was so interesting to read about thus young woman. she us strong willed that she over came the odds

3yr
Duckfero
DuckferoLv4

Overall, it's a good story but there are also many problem (which also happen in the author's others novel). The romance happen way too fast!! I would like to see a FL rising to greatness with her own abilities (she has the abbility btw), but everything is given to her on a silver plate by the ML... Other than that, the comedy is good, the characters are funny, and the plot is ok. This author has talent, but pleaseee, make a novel with late romance!!! And a real independant FL!!

3yr
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