Item: Ugly Little Feelings
Rating: 4
Author: BlackCarapace

BlackCarapaceLv55yr

2019-10-25 23:27

Honestly, I'm just read first chapter. I'm confused with name of your character. There is already so much name that I must remember for the first chapter. For some one with bad memory, they need more time to remember the character. Grammar is good.

Ugly Little Feelings

wickedwinter

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