Review Detail of DoLanTwInZ in The True Born Alpha

Honestly really like it so far, *clap clap* I'm not really one to criticize and judge especially bec I'm not the best at writing myself. But Adrian's dream was by far my favorite, very detailed and seemed to be thought out very well. I can't wait for new updates bec I always want to hear more from you, or read however you wanna put it xD