Review Detail of ShinoD in gianii

It's a pretty decent book writing quality 4/5 stability 3/5 story 4/5 characters 5/5 and world background 3/5. You should really exercise your descripitive talent.I wouldn't say that if you would've started with the better description from chapter one instead of letting it after chapter 11.The characters are cool(Tohka best waifu) and Hikari a clear badass reminding me of Levi.I am a huge fan of Paul because he reminds me just a bit of Taurus Silver.You should give more details about the world around the characters and post more often.For a fast story book the action is just a bit slow and you are not describing the battles enough so i can't really tell how it would look.That's all Countinue and become better!