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Review Detail of korrorn in gianii

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Good soo You've got good story 5/5.The action is interesting and pretty cool as well! I like the way it goes to. I can see that in your country the english isn't the main language but the problem isn't the grammar.The problem is that you aren't the best at describing The character design is the incredible.Hikari is cool and different with his sarcastic lines and even though Paul is a "shone protagonist" is quite different from one.He feels pretty deep and cheerful but it looks like he had a harsh past...Maybe see more in the future. I've got no problem with the background it being pretty good. My biggest problem that i rated 3/5 is the stability of updates.I like hte book but if you publish it like a weekly manga it will make the readers get bored.So post more because it won't get popular if you don't get a schedule. Overall the book have got a big potential so i rate it 4.4/5 It would be a 4.8/5 if you would have posted more.Keep up the good work!

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