This book has some of the best world design I've ever read. The characters are extremely well written and have their own opinions thoughts and little qwerks that make them unique. You can clearly see the Author's care for this novel, and I look forward to reading more of the story!
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Does the world design get better? Starts off terribly by referring to a dukedom without specifying if it's in a kingdom and then says the kingdom is attacked and he returns to the dukedom. Very confusing and *******ish writing with confusing references and mistakes especially with time, first chapter says he's been in the army for 1 year, 2nd says 8 hours earlier and 3rd says 6 years fighting in army?!? Does the writing get better or is it always this bad?
The first park's are a little here and there, but further along the author does a very good job with keeping times consistent along with the date at the top of the majority of chaps. He also does a great job with characters and making them feel more than just hollow side peices. I will admit there are rough spots in there, but it is worth the read and the coins.
