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Hmm... Where do I start.. I'll be frank, I wasn't much interested in the initial plot parts. Since I'm used to the mc being op, and slaughtering his way up. Faust on the other hand... Didn't exactly meet those criteria. Then comes the part where the narrations seem endless. The grammar was improper in the beginning as well. And that's all of the complaints I have. (Don't kill me for this) Next comes the pro points. I love how the author proceeded with Faust's character development. *and I'm always expecting more action as well as gore, as promised from the first chap* Though the story was slow paced in the beginning, it's slowly catching up. The grammar too, has been fixed as the author has mentioned in his notes. This novel, has lots of potential and trust me, I was probably the second happiest person when I saw that it got contracted XD **: Happy New year, and be happy :)

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Aww, that was very detailed and helpful 🤧🤧 Thank you very much for taking the time, A very Happy New Year to you as well!!!!!!!

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MiniAceAuthorMiniAce

Aww, that was very detailed and helpful 🤧🤧 Thank you very much for taking the time, A very Happy New Year to you as well!!!!!!!