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It's great how imaginative the author is -- he doesn't hold back when it comes to world building. The characters are likeable, the story's pacing is decent, and the action is on point. It's still too early to seriously judge the story, but I can certainly conclude that it's interesting, that's for sure. Unfortunately, the story's a little bit rough around the edges because of the author's writing skills, but it's nothing a bit of polish can't fix. Cheers!

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The World We Do Not know

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Thank you very much for the kind words. I will definitely improve myself and do justification for my story 😁 Appreciate your review very much!!