The storyline is good and interesting. There are no grammatical errors or typos that i could find so far. The author has done a good job. Keep it up 👍♥️
MiniAce
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Thank you so much dum dum😭😭 I was sad all these days thinking if my novel even making sense😭
You're more than welcome and just a little bit of advice, try to shorten the the length of the chapters and do regular updates.
MiniAce:Thank you so much dum dum😭😭 I was sad all these days thinking if my novel even making sense😭
Thank you, will definitely do it 💪💪
My pleasure 😊