Review Detail of immensely_earnest in The World We Do Not know

Hey author! Stories are this are not common in webnovel. So, it's refreshing to see one. It's only 3 chapters, so I won't comment about the development. The idea itself is really good. But I hope to see development in the main lead. As for the grammar, it's not perfect, but it's fine. Good luck, author! And thank you for creating a new piece and working hard on it.