THIS IS ALL MY OPINION SO I COULD BE WRONG: As much as I like this novel there's something that annoys me about it and that is your understanding of Bakugo. A lot like basically every author who makes a fanfic about MHA you misunderstood his character. Bakugo isn't some unreasonable bully who bullies everybody, his problem is that everyone he knew basically worshipped him once he got his quirk and it all went to his head, so when Midoriya who was quirkless treated him as an equal he thought Midoriya was looking down on him so he got angry and bullied him. When he found out Midoriya had a powerful quirk he got angry because he thought that Midoriya lied to him all these years and was still looking down on him. When they fought after All Might retired we are shown that he felt responsible for All Might's retirement. What I understand from all of this is that Bakugo was placed on a pedestal as a child so it messed up the execution of his ideals and he got angry at one of the very few people who treated him as an equal because he felt he was being looked down on, but deep down I think he knew that his only real friend was Midoriya. When he found out Midoriya had a quirk he felt betrayed by him and lashed out. Bakugo has been stated by Midoriya to be someone who has an incredible desire to be an hero and also the best of his generation. This is just my opinion on the matter, I love this story keep it up

There is problem with this novel. I cannot see this novel in overall fanfic ranking and new fanfic ranking. Hope author get enough exposure to this novel, with the help of his previous novel.

I like the story but the pace of it is really is to fast.Theres so much more you can write about in the prologue of the story before the canon starts but all you write is he gets a quirk when kachan bullys him.He basically makes no friends and stays lowner where he only talks with his mum as a friend until he gets into UA.Hes more mature but also abit upfront with people.The way you write his personality makes it seem like he dosent even want to talk to the other charachters. Over all the first impression of the novel wasent bad per say,but I felt like I was reading a really plain and stright to the action novel where he skips past that charachter interaction and goes stright to the action plays.

An excellent start for something the can turn out to be another masterpiece from the author. Izuku is not a snivelling **** in this one, he is competent, cool-headed and has a very good quirk. The writing quality is top noch and it is too early to tell about the update stability, but for now 4 chapters in one day is 5 stars in my book. The story does not seem to develop too fast nor too slow, so a good pacing so far.

..........................🔥 🔥🔥. 🔥 👍👍. 👍👍👌 👌👌👌❤❤❤❤❤.............. ..........'....................................................... 🔥🔥🔥🔥 I love the character desigin and way of writing....I hope you will be make this fan-fic as good as the Harry potter fan-fic........ I am looking forward for more of your writings of fan-fics and other novels....I love this novel tooo... ......................KEEP DOING GOOD WORK...................

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Tbh i want exp but i like this story so get free stars for rate.

Excellent start to the novel. Mc's character design is good (finally a 'hero-type' character with come some rationality but without stupidity, in My hero academia fanfics) Plot premise is good. Plot progression - hope it will be good. Character interactions are above average. Hope author completes this novel too.

Writing quality is above average author updates once a day, story so far is following the plot, most likely will change in the future. Character development is good-ish doesn't really talk much about the world. Would recommend his other novel, Harry Potter: Rise of the Spiral It's a good novel, a bit short (50 chapters) but it's at least finished. In the end I expect great things from this novel, as it's author is great with story telling.