Wow! This is a truly beautiful and unique story. The only reason for deduction of points is that the few here and there grammatical errors. Other than that, the plotline was written out absolutely beautifully, to the point it was capable of drawing in one's fascinated attention. The writing style was the best part for me, and the plot for the story is quite unique and captivating in its own way! Keep up with the good work!
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