Although I haven't read far I can see this story has a lot of potential. I can read past the grammar mistakes as I find it common umong great writers. Most great writers put the ideas and words on paper creating a diamond through hard work, blood, Sweat, and tears, creating a diamond, the editors polish it. I hope you keep writing and always strive to do better in anything you do. I hope you continue writing with a passion and never listen to those who try to tear you down. Do not feel obligated to write if you do not feel like writing. Some writers feel it is their obligation to constantly write but a writer has to take breaks to creat good stories, stress never helps a story. Take a breather or a short break to refresh your mind. Also Never let anyone or anything destroy your love or passion for writing. I hope you have a fun and great time. 😁
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