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mozza_mello
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Alright, let me start off by saying that this is an excellently written novel :D First off, the writing itself is flawless. Very smooth, descriptive, and clear. The use of punctuation is also perfect! :D Okay now for the best part. The way the author sets up the mood is impeccable. The author did not only plainly describe the location and such, but the way the author wrote it makes me feel the mood. It was a very immersive read, which is always a great thing, especially for a thriller/horror novel. Not only the mood, but the way the characters were portrayed is also top-notch for me. I like how the author did not focus on the appearance, but rather on small, subtle things that build up the character's traits. Like the way they move when they talk, the way they stutter, the way they react in situations, I love it! :D Sorry for the long review, the point is I really enjoyed reading this hehe! Great work, author! <3

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A Hitchhiker, A House, and Sausages

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While I’m incredibly flattered (I’m not even kidding I’m blushing right now) I actually disagree... the power of the story lies in the soft suspense and realisation of the protagonist. Which are silent. But perhaps you’re just a way better visionary than I am, and you could pull it off.

mozza_mello:ah, I also forgot to add that this would actually be great as a movie hehe :D
Sigheti
SighetiAuthorSigheti

I’m blown away by your response, thank you so much for your feedback.

mozza_mello
mozza_melloLv3mozza_mello

ah, I also forgot to add that this would actually be great as a movie hehe :D

Sigheti:I’m blown away by your response, thank you so much for your feedback.
mozza_mello
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I do agree on the silent build-up, and there's always something that only words can convey which a movie can't (and vice-versa ofc hehe), but I can't help picturing the scenes in my mind while reading, and it felt alive hehe! I'm not good at explaining, just a thought that maybe, if conveyed correctly, a visual representation could be cool lol :D but that's up to debate, of course hehe!

Sigheti:While I’m incredibly flattered (I’m not even kidding I’m blushing right now) I actually disagree... the power of the story lies in the soft suspense and realisation of the protagonist. Which are silent. But perhaps you’re just a way better visionary than I am, and you could pull it off.