Review Detail of Invisiblevoice in Naruto Shippuden: The Legendary Team
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I like how the author writes, it's emotional and you can see the struggle of the characters. They pass for a more realistic reactions than most of the reckless reincarnators, especially since it's gradual. There's a "maybe i can change what happens this time" instead of an "i'll change everything because why not"; and a "the world is too big for me to do and save everything by myself" instead of "i'll dominate everything because i'm OP and the world revolves around me". It is more realistic (inside its own fantasy realm of course) and gives way to the "what ifs" that could happen in the cannon, i mean, it keeps the essense of the characters and the changes in the timeline are things that even the characters find intriguing so it doesn't come as plot holes but as something that makes you think it has a reason. Overall i could say it's pretty good, it reads as a more formal fanfic so it seems as if it's not going to be dropped because is orderly, as if the author has long thought how the story goes. That's the feeling it gives me, hope i'm right and the author keeps the quality.
Naruto Shippuden: The Legendary Team
CrescentLights
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Precisely. This fan-fiction feels well thought out, and I can see and read the effort that was put into it. These are the type of stories, original or not that is what readers will obsess over. I believe the author will keep her quality because writing should always be something that the writer loves to do, not entirely based on how many views, fame, or money the novel earns. Author, if you plan to do any other novels, please tell me about it. I enjoy your writing style.
Thank you so much for this as well as for OP's touching review. <3 I highly appreciate it. As for other novels, I've already written two stories for this site. Unfortunately, they're both first drafts, so the plot and pacing seem quite unsteady as I still don't know how to write them yet. ^^
MilordInk:Precisely. This fan-fiction feels well thought out, and I can see and read the effort that was put into it. These are the type of stories, original or not that is what readers will obsess over. I believe the author will keep her quality because writing should always be something that the writer loves to do, not entirely based on how many views, fame, or money the novel earns. Author, if you plan to do any other novels, please tell me about it. I enjoy your writing style.
Take your time. I also have many first drafts, but I'm far from your level. Haha. Publish them when you believe they're good enough.
CrescentLights:Thank you so much for this as well as for OP's touching review. <3 I highly appreciate it. As for other novels, I've already written two stories for this site. Unfortunately, they're both first drafts, so the plot and pacing seem quite unsteady as I still don't know how to write them yet. ^^
Ahh, I'm not that good at creating stories, at least not when they're inside a world I created myself, haha;;; I'd love to read your novels someday though! Do tell me if you publish them here. ^^ (And I've actually published my first drafts here on Webnovel but I'm still stuck with the plotline, lol.)
MilordInk:Take your time. I also have many first drafts, but I'm far from your level. Haha. Publish them when you believe they're good enough.