Review Detail of Alex1911 in Naruto: Journey of the strongest teacher

I believe that even if he has all those DNA he has to get used to them. In most fights where he fainted he learned a new Jutsu that strained his body. I have seen enough super overpowered Mc that won without breaking a sweat and I didn’t want to write like them. For his personality, I totally agree that he has a one sided obsession as I have no clue how relationships work but I disagree that he disregard everyone. He had a nice family and wants to make everything he did wrong, right. If he disregarded everything he would just take Naruto’s and Sasuke’s chakra and never interact with them. And being worse then Black Zetsu is the worst insult I have ever heard. Made me question my choices I made in life and if my irl personality is the same as black zetsu. I just hope you still continue reading and maybe your opinion will change. Or not but hope you have fun.

I agree with having a super OP MC can be boring, but with those power he has, it's impossible for him not to be OP, the moment one achieve rinnengan, their strength spike, even mangenkyou improve one strength significantly, tbh I don't think you can activate it without sufficient chakra so being faint by just having it open is unreasonable, I don't think even Nagato faint and he was just a kid, if you don't want to make him so op, maybe just leave it at sharringan or eternal? and let him achieve rinnengan latter? Also him fainting too much is becoming repetitive, unless it's again fodder I can't think of instance where he didn't faint after a fight. For his personality, I admit compare him with zetsu is too much so I'll apologies, maybe it's just the unreasonableness of his obsession that turn me off? I'll probably stack up chapter so I'll read it latter. thank for writing author.

reading your comments makes me not want to read this op but done wrong is what it sounds like regardless of how you want to say it those bloodlines make him op plus rinnegan but he still faints just uzimaki bloodline gives massive chakra even with bad control it wouldn't be to the point of fainting so that being said ive no interest in reading this even tho it looked like it would of been good.by all means this is not meant to discourage you

Well author base on the bloodlines that he has he should have massive pool of chakra since all and I mean every Uzumaki has a massive chakra pool and since Senju is a cousin clan to them I think it's almost the same amount of chakra and if that wasn't enough it seems he is also a descendant Hagoromo the sage of six paths an otsutsuki which they all have tail beast level chakra so he shouldn't be fainting feom chakra exhaustion unless he's spamming planetary devastations.

If you didn’t want him to be OP why did you give him the most OP bloodlines? Just having Uzumaki and Senju will make it nearly impossible for him to run out of chakra and having a rinnegan will make it even more impossible.