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Review Detail of Lize in Naruto: Journey of the strongest teacher

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Lize
LizeLv134yrLize

The start of the story is good.. But sadly tho.. The author didnt give his mc more attention.. Not only he nerf him.. ( by giving rinnegan to mc, while he doesnt have chakra to support it ) He give more focus on naruto harem.. Rather than mc own lover.. He even ask if he should add another girl to naruto harem or not in ch 21 ( maybe, i forgot in which chapter, around that chapter in author thought chapter ).. Its getting irritating seeing that mc only there to support naruto.. Like making path way to naruto.. If it like this.. isnt it better to make naruto the mc instead.. and add OC to teach naruto.. Oh well.. hope the mc will trully become mc in later chapter.. It is interesting novel.. but its hard for me to continue it..

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Naruto: Journey of the strongest teacher

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50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv1350ShadesOfAss

Wtf then why is this such a high rating LOL

Lize
LizeLv13Lize

Dunno.. šŸ˜‚šŸ¤£ Well.. his love interest turn out to be kaguya.. Idk how they meet.. i already drop the novel.. šŸ˜‚šŸ¤£

50ShadesOfAss:Wtf then why is this such a high rating LOL
NotPickleRick
NotPickleRickLv1NotPickleRick

bots

50ShadesOfAss:Wtf then why is this such a high rating LOL
JaimeX07
JaimeX07Lv6JaimeX07

thanks for taking the bullet, idk why someone would like to read about a support building a harem for someone else. as you said MC should have been naruto then

lmpossible
lmpossibleLv3lmpossible

SPOILER FUCKKKKK

Lize:Dunno.. šŸ˜‚šŸ¤£ Well.. his love interest turn out to be kaguya.. Idk how they meet.. i already drop the novel.. šŸ˜‚šŸ¤£
Gingai
GingaiLv3Gingai

eww

Overwrit
OverwritLv3Overwrit

Many very bad stories of this kind have 4-5 stars in the ratings, and the worst thing is that most critics give them less than 4, and yet they go so far.

50ShadesOfAss:Wtf then why is this such a high rating LOL
Razikiel
RazikielLv3Razikiel

fake accounts

50ShadesOfAss:Wtf then why is this such a high rating LOL
Cat_a_strophic
Cat_a_strophicLv4Cat_a_strophic

feminism at its finest.

Grenhaer
GrenhaerLv4Grenhaer

Rovontheus
RovontheusLv3Rovontheus

Thanks for the info Wont bothet reading iy

CZFanficsDelta
CZFanficsDeltaLv3CZFanficsDelta

well there was no need for an inserted mc if the story revolves around naruto... thanks for your review it saved me from reading this and looking for something better

acasualreader
acasualreaderLv4acasualreader

He equally fought first and second hokage but couldn't handle a weakened orochimaru and kabuto. He call kushina and Minato his adopted parents but let them die bc he "forgot". There are more inconsistencies but the author is new and it's a mildly interesting concept. 2/5

Lord_of_cringe9000
Lord_of_cringe9000Lv3Lord_of_cringe9000

What ? How? I mean I understand about him being interested in Kaguya but not Kaguya being interested in him although canon Kaguya did have horrible tasts

Lize:Dunno.. šŸ˜‚šŸ¤£ Well.. his love interest turn out to be kaguya.. Idk how they meet.. i already drop the novel.. šŸ˜‚šŸ¤£
covestar
covestarLv13covestar

Thank you for your comment, you have saved me time, I donā€™t understand why the story is rated so high then?