I liked the beginning of the story but the MC status isn’t clear. I don’t know is he’s strong or weak , smart or stupid. It’s unclear, he’s basically afraid of a normal human, no matter how strong a human can be he’s still a human do I don’t get it. Making S.H.I.E.L.D overpowerd without a basis or reasons is also weird. I don’t know but i think you could’ve done better if you wanted to make Marvel universe on Hell mode. The MC character is a bit weird. On the other hand, your story has some very funny material that i really enjoyed. Keep it up and Good luck
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