Review Detail of cade2065 in Born With a Unique Skill

Writing Quality: 3, it's not absolutely atrocious. There are some misspellings, grammar, and punctuations ( where are your commas and periods! 😭 R.I.P commas and periods.) Stability of updates: 5, it's good so far. Story development: 3, it’s moving a little too fast. Character development: 0, there is none.😕 World development: 1, it needs to be expanded on. Overall this isn't a story this is a journal, each chapter is a summary of what the mc did that day/week/ month, which is not good; the real issue is the lack of character development it's preventing this from becoming a story. Also, expand on the world the mc lives in, you’ve given us some things like getting a system when one turns 16, and ways to level up, now give us more information about the world. Working on these two would raise the quality of this from a ’journal’ to a ’decent story.’ Hope this review helps! 👍🏾