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ElisabethSuelli
ElisabethSuelliLv35yr
2019-08-26 19:42

I've enjoyed these first couple of chapters, and the writing is solid. Couple of spelling errors here and there, but nothing that yanked me out of the story. Plot is interesting, and I look forward to reading more of where it'll go from here!

Mistress of Domination- Night King's Pampered Wife

immensely_earnest
4.8
5 Chs

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immensely_earnest
immensely_earnestAuthor

For now it has only 3 chapters. I couldn't edit the chapters due to time issues(exams), but I'll have a friend proofread it for me. Yes! Please look forward to it. Thank you. It means a lot. ♥️

5yr
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Jenjibread
JenjibreadLv4

The characters all have pretty defining personalities, and you subtly hint at the general construct of the world without giving a full-on narration. I like the way the story paces itself. It's not too rushed nor too slow. Overall, I found it to be an enjoyable read! Good luck!

5yr

Peachwoodgirl6
Peachwoodgirl6Lv5

I am a big fan of Romance novel's, but this one is also interesting, I like the shades of lead character, she is strong and vicious but I liked it a lot. Keep up the good work.

5yr
MiniAce
MiniAceLv4

I'm not good at writing reviews, every work looks.good to me. But I have to say the writing in this totally pulled me into the story and enjoyed the story development. ** hoping laoshu is really hot... I like hot and evil chicks 🤣🤣 just some unreal preference. I recommend this story to everybody that stopped by here after reading synopsis... Just go for it 🤗🤗

5yr
maryanneangel2015
maryanneangel2015Lv10

Teruskan tulis cerita ini..terlalu sedikit... Harap dapat keluarkan banyak chapter setiap hari..jalan cerita juga tidak menghampakan.......

5yr
SharpJester
SharpJesterLv5

As of currently, there is four chapters to this story. This is for a 'review for a review'. Be warned, I do long reviews. To start off the bat, I do enjoy the more hardy, more stern MC. It is still a bit early on but I do hope to see what sorts of developments the author will make with this woman. Not only that but I do want to see more development in the world itself. From the few cultivation stories I've read, I'm invested a bit to see where this story grows and how the author will make it stand out from the crowd. My main critique is that the writing is more so "telling" rather than "showing". I feel as though this story would benefit from having the plot be told in a more descriptive sense rather than it feeling like a re-telling of events. Don't be afraid to describe more of what the world looks like, what the main character feels, what they see from others. Rather than have it straight to the point, take your time to reveal what happens next. Do note that this story is a bit too early in development to make any solid opinions. However, the lead up so far is solid and it'll be interesting to see where the author will take the plot. I will admit, cultivation stories aren't my cup of tea. So take what you will with this review. Best of luck to you dear author.

5yr
LiNa_Author
LiNa_AuthorLv3

Read the synopsis, it caught my interest, Read 4 chapters.. I can say that novel is pretty good till now. waiting for more. Story line is very interesting.. The characters development and the background is also good...it keeps you engrossed. I am going to continue reading it. Author..plz continue with the updates.. and do not leave the book in between.

5yr
_Sha
_ShaLv10

Just from the synopsis you can measure how well thought must be the story and here come Mistress of Domination. I know its early review but gem should shine from the first early appearance, right? I can tell that author will keep his pace. Goodluck Author san

5yr
dumdum007
dumdum007Lv5

The plot seems pretty interesting. Though it's just has three chapters for the time being, but they seem to be promising. Except for the ****y tiny mistakes it has like a full stop missing (which can be ignored), I couldn't find any. Good work author 👍👌♥️♥️♥️

5yr
sososooososooso
sososooososoosoLv3

First chapter was great. Plot seems promising. I really do find the idea of a scheming Mc my cup of tea. Introduction to cultivation was ingenious, covered both a key point (dads crippled) and the context for the power in relation to cultivation level

5yr
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