Review Detail of amaturewriter in Harry Potter and the Vampire From Another World

Storys pretty awesome and interesting.... suggestion: dont make this a cliche type BS story where MC starts building his own faction..make him like a unique loner type MC..with him only turning his lovers into vampires....maybe add world travel and if you are doing romance dont make it stupid and slutty but a proper romantic development...and if harem max 3-5....also an OP MC ..keep him like that like i mean just physically you can see that this can easily kill every character in HP.... Anyway these are just suggestions..you do you..good luck and good show.