Item: ZORO in HSDxD
Rating: 2.2

Heavenly_DevilLv115yr

2019-08-30 21:16

What is this bull? Generic characters, generic mc, generic mc, generic mc(important things are said three times), the mother, comes and becomes a typical person, like "Lips smile yet her eyes say something different".... ??? Why bother? I'm going to continue and upload all shortcoming here.

ZORO in HSDxD

King_Of_Babylon

3.4

54 Chs

Liked by 9 people

Replies17

Heavenly_DevilLv11

Impossible to find out what's actual text and what's Speavh text. Useless author not even knowing how to do something this simple.

5yr

Heavenly_DevilLv11

Barely start to learn swordsmanship, N already has that so called "Pride". Pitiful, delusional, mental mc... SIGH~

5yr

Heavenly_DevilLv11

And, dont get me started on the pressure that came put of know where, like what?! Yuuto is already trash in my books, alone with this book.

5yr

Heavenly_DevilLv11

Uses extraordinary powers, nobody cares or investigates! WHAT?! GODDAMN THIS SHIT!

5yr

Heavenly_DevilLv11

Calls someone master, gets training in everything he already had in the Zoro Book. Come on, you braindead mc!

5yr

Heavenly_DevilLv11

The girls in here are just prizes that are installed with the right reaction to suit MC. All I see when I read about the girls, is Cocksleaves.

5yr

Heavenly_DevilLv11

Dragon out of nowhere, and ready to join Harem. Pitiful sex deprived Author.

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5yr

Heavenly_DevilLv11

I'm sorry, but the cancer is slowly growing. This whole novel is cancer manifested.

5yr

Heavenly_DevilLv11

I'm sorry, but the cancer is slowly growing. This whole novel is cancer manifested.

5yr

ALegendsLv5

So honestly if u don’t like then don’t read 👍👍👍👍👍👍

5yr

swordzeroLv6

It's all the truth the novel is really bad and it will kill your brain cells and it's called a review for a reason. If the novel of course you should tell people not to waste their time on this novel.

ALegends:So honestly if u don’t like then don’t read 👍👍👍👍👍👍

5yr

Heavenly_DevilLv11

What I do, when I do it, and why I do it... shouldn't matter to you.

ALegends:So honestly if u don’t like then don’t read 👍👍👍👍👍👍

5yr

JuexLv4

thank for the warning would have been really disapointed having high expectations for this

5yr

Heavenly_DevilLv11

I know it's late, but... Thank you!

swordzero:It's all the truth the novel is really bad and it will kill your brain cells and it's called a review for a reason. If the novel of course you should tell people not to waste their time on this novel.

4yr

Heavenly_DevilLv11

I know it's late, but... Thank you!

swordzero:It's all the truth the novel is really bad and it will kill your brain cells and it's called a review for a reason. If the novel of course you should tell people not to waste their time on this novel.

4yr

Primordial_TwoLv4

For some reason I read this as Marcel from BasicallyIDoWrk

4yr

JJOKERRLv5

why lol

4yr

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King_Of_BabylonAuthor

Our Mc is gonna be op With õtsutsuki bloodline:rinnegan,tenseigan,sharingan,mangekyou Slayer magic:god slayer,dragon slayer,devil slayer Zanpakuto:muramasa able to use any all shikai and bankai and last but no the least all kido

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Tsubasa93Lv14

Grammar is horrendous. Capitalizes maybe two sentences on any given page and never any names. Boring story straight from the wishes. Everything is generic, the descriptions lack any depth and the clichés are overused.

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Story starts with a cliche and ends with one. Id honestly not be bothered by that if it was handled well. Instead he goes to be looking like zoro but with endless magical abilities, ranging otsutsuki bloodline from the get go, all the way to ever shikai and bankai of every last zanpakuto in bkeach. In other words a big stock of magical powers. Pointless. Bottom line, story has no future as the entire premise is based on a cintradiction. Omnipotent god being appears, takes energy from soul that soul gained in the void as trade. But then if god could get the soul out of the void to do all this why would he need the energy from the kids soul instead of taking it directly from the void? Makes no sense.

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