Review Detail of RisenTan in Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

Item: Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)
Rating: 4.2

Review detail

RisenTanLv12yrRisenTan

The story seems good. But I dropped it because I can’t stand shitty grammatical and punctuation issues which could be so easily resolved. Either way it’s a pain in the ass to read.

Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

HolyJoker

Liked it!

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HolyJokerAuthorHolyJoker

It was my first story, and I understand the problem. Thanks for being honest, I apreciate it.

2yr

Saad_YousufLv4Saad_Yousuf

I thought you died.

HolyJoker:It was my first story, and I understand the problem. Thanks for being honest, I apreciate it.

2yr

Leo_BassistLv12Leo_Bassist

when do you have a new evil fanfic?

HolyJoker:It was my first story, and I understand the problem. Thanks for being honest, I apreciate it.

2yr

wanderingmage123Lv3wanderingmage123

will u update blood mage on webnovel

HolyJoker:It was my first story, and I understand the problem. Thanks for being honest, I apreciate it.

2yr

showdawnLv1showdawn

You and your friend MessyLife have been gone for months, and you both return to activity on the same day, almost at the same time. Either you live together, or he is an alternate account of yours, or this was an incredible coincidence and I am just overthinking it...

HolyJoker:It was my first story, and I understand the problem. Thanks for being honest, I apreciate it.

2yr

Eltoxico69Lv4Eltoxico69

You have discovered the biggest secret of webnovel, congratulations

showdawn:You and your friend MessyLife have been gone for months, and you both return to activity on the same day, almost at the same time. Either you live together, or he is an alternate account of yours, or this was an incredible coincidence and I am just overthinking it...

1yr