Review Detail of eshwavinG in BIRTH OF THE DEVILISH CEO:SO WHAT IF I'M A LADY?

Plot looked really promising. I started reading but the narration and writing quality kept going down. There were too many grammatical errors and sudden changes of narration that made it hard to make sense of what was going on. And that makes for a bad reading experience. Suggesting the author to get an experienced editor as there is pretty good potential in the plot.