This is probably the best story I’ve encountered so far. Excellent plot , great pacing , awesome references, likeable characters. It’s on its way to being an amazing story. Reminds me of kingdom when I first started reading that manga but with an excellent fantasy twist. The fantasy elements don’t overpower the realism in this story and that is what makes this amazing read to me. I need more chapters this story is a wonder drug
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LIKEHey, Thaddy_Morsell! Thanks for the review! I am humbled to even be considered anywhere near Kingdom. I love that manga too which is probably why I opted to name the units in the same manner instead of the original plan of using Roman military jargon. Plus, it's easier for people to understand than me having to explain Legatus or Legionnaire every dozen chapters or so. Hehe With regards to realism and fantasy, I do my best to keep a balance so as to keep it grounded and feel more possible. I hate it when a story breaks away from reality too much. Appreciate you liking the characters. Any favorites so far? And yeah, I do my best to maintain the pace but it does get hard when I'm planning such big arcs. Sometimes, my readers nudge me a little to remind me that I'm slowing down. Feel free to join in. Glad you're enjoying the Foolhardies! More of this wonder drug to come. It's going to be a fun-filled, hopefully long but not dragging adventure!
Yeah... that's what a lot of readers have said too. Lol. :p Keep enjoying our rascal drow! Don't forget to vote and gift if you want to but I will appreciate more comments from you! Thanks
LordThaddy:Favorite character so far ? Thom 100%
By the way, if you have Discord, you can find me there. I talk to my readers about the book there. :) GD_Cruz#3598- Discord
LordThaddy:Favorite character so far ? Thom 100%
GD_Cruz:By the way, if you have Discord, you can find me there. I talk to my readers about the book there. :) GD_Cruz#3598- Discord