Review Detail of RedLaw in The Foolhardies
Review detail
A very interesting story. The mc is a little naive despite being smart but hey, he truly young. At least at his age I didn't make war strategy and fought or killed. This the story of a young man trying is all to give his brother his liberty. From the start we are sent in our world different from our with creature different from us. There some things I don't like in the story(well it's mostly some characters who grate on my nerves ) but all in all this story is truly good. Just a heads up. If you want to see a OP mc who can destroy army with one wave of his hands, this story isn't for you. This story is about a mc who must use his newly obtained power and his mind in order stay ahead of everyone. The fight will generally be large scale wars.
The Foolhardies
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Vadoom and aura. Vadoom because well he uses an abusing bastard. And aura because I don't really trust her. đ I never liked the novel where the hero is summoned to save the world because no matter what they say, they kidnapped someone in order to force him to fight their wars. Well here it's more a deal made between the two of them but I still don't trust her. She may care a little about him, but she cares more about her kingdom, nothing says that she won't sacrifice him if she could stop the war by doing so. Still, that also what I like about your story. Every character act in a different way that made them easy to distinguish from the other. We may hate or love them but that doesn't change that they are beautifully wrote
GD_Cruz:I love this review because of how honest Redlaw is with how the story strikes him. In a way, Dean is naive, and he certainly isn't OP. Every victory is hard earned. Thanks so much! Just curious, which characters grated on your nerves? I hope you continue to read and enjoy the Foolhardies. XD
That's high praise. Thank you for saying so. đ Yeah, I understand how you would feel with Aura's motivations... whether or not the partnership established in the beginning between them holds out... well, keep reasing and enjoy!
RedLaw:Vadoom and aura. Vadoom because well he uses an abusing bastard. And aura because I don't really trust her. đ I never liked the novel where the hero is summoned to save the world because no matter what they say, they kidnapped someone in order to force him to fight their wars. Well here it's more a deal made between the two of them but I still don't trust her. She may care a little about him, but she cares more about her kingdom, nothing says that she won't sacrifice him if she could stop the war by doing so. Still, that also what I like about your story. Every character act in a different way that made them easy to distinguish from the other. We may hate or love them but that doesn't change that they are beautifully wrote