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So a bunch more chapters in and I feel like sharing another review with potential readers. The development of the whole cast has so far progressed rather smoothly and most characters seem interesting enough that I am looking forward to what they'll do next. The battles written so far do seem rather well thought out, and the focus on the strategic level of what's going on rather than the singular focus on the hero's personal fight(which is much more common in fantasy ime) is both refreshing and a nice fit for Dean's shown capabilities. There stil isn't much to say about the quality of the writing, it is still much better than a lot of stories on WebNovel. The divide between fay and normal world has so far been maintained, but thee have been alusions to issues resulting from having to interact with both.
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Yeah, I get that there can be a disconnect between both worlds as they're sooo far apart from each other. :) But I hope I can stabilize it in future chapters to make the transition smoother. I love your feedback on the characters especially since your first review of them wasn't favorable. Thank you for keeping up with the story. :) Battles too. As I don't really use reference materials so I can be original in my content, it becomes quite a challenge to plan it out in my head. I can only imagine how difficult it will be when I've got thousands against thousands coming. Haha Thank you for writing another review. It is much appreciated.