Review Detail of LoneStar in The Foolhardies
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Quality - That's how I would sum up this novel so far. The story is interesting, the characters are engaging, and the setting is portrayed very well. I have no trouble at all imagining the scenes and the grammar is top rate. If the author keeps the quality the same... I have no doubt this will be one of the best novels on this site. One suggestion: make sure your paragraphs aren't too large - Large blocks of text can be offputting on the app. Keep it up the good work! I'll be waiting for future updates.
The Foolhardies
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Coming from one of the authors whose works I read myself, I am humbled. Thank you! I'll do my best to try and lessen sentences in a paragraph. It's good advice. To be honest, keeping the quality the way it is can be challenging on a daily post schedule but I will do my absolute best. :) I hope you keep enjoying The Foolhardies.