Item: Reincarnated in Dragon Ball world: stuck as SSJ5
Rating: 2
Author: Pj23o3

Pj23o3Lv45yr

2020-02-05 23:47

Ok. This novel might be you first so I won't be critisising your writing..seriously ,though, it's fine putting none cannon transformations,but saying that freeza has trillions in power level and saying that the MC was shocked unconscious for a year while having millions in PL is just garbage bull****.FIX THE POWER LEVELS.Also I think that your progressing the novel too quick.had a nice "overpowered MC" idea at the start but it turned out sh*t

Reincarnated in Dragon Ball world: stuck as SSJ5

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