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Its and interesting novel the MC isn't a naive man, got a good brain,easy to adapt on situation like combat battle (maybe its from system) and its look like in the future chapter there will be some good fight scene.I hope this novel survive until the end of novel (it will be interesting if he can travel to other world too xD)

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This is a good read and has a lot of potential since the author has made a very good start with his first 12 chapters and hopefully he can continue doing a great job.

I love it 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

I love it 😃😃😃😃😃😃I love it 😃😃😃😃I love it 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

Mr.Author, I'll be honest with you. Your idea is good but unfortunately, it's an old idea. Furthermore, even though your idea is good you did not execute it well enough and to add salt to an injury, your grammar is extremely broken to the point where I, a reader whose English is my third languages could perceive how broken your grammar. I know my review is somewhat harsh but I did not have any intent to discourage you or stop you from writing a novel, but I really do encourage you to learn and fix your English and sincerely wish you luck in your journey to great success. And I'll appreciate you more if you did not delete this review of mine.