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Yo_Man
Yo_ManLv45mthYo_Man

This review based on the development of the story after XT caught cheating. Well how can i define this, after being caught cheating, XT becomes like someone begging for love. I know the purpose of this conflict, but the conflict was taken too long without any resolution. And honestly for me, you make the harem personality such as LXY not worth for XT after all he do to get her daughter back and last hes pretend to be someone just to get to LXY again? Thats a no move from me

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Shooting_Star
Shooting_StarAuthorShooting_Star

Sigh.... just because it's a story, many readers want everything to be perfect. I really dont get this train of thought. this is a realistic story so I wanted to make it as realistic as possible. what is wrong with begging for love? XT loves her, so of course, he often wants to explain everything to her. you should think in her place too. have you never loved someone? if you do, you will understand his feeling. Now, let me ask you something, what will you do if you know your lover is cheating on you? I know that the conflict is taken too long without any resolution, but it's for the plot. I can finish it in one chapter, but the story won't move forward later. all this time, I only made a lovey-dovey moments and I want to focus on story now. sigh.....

Yo_Man
Yo_ManLv4Yo_Man

U r joking right? Bruh if this realistic, there would never be a harem. And incest with your mother and your aunt thats just impossible. Yes, for me MC become like a loser. Why would you hiding your identity just so you can get to close to your suppose to be loved one? Thats just stalking. He's a man alright, MC always try to find a reason to leave them alone, cause he's afraid. Cmon author i still like your story but please bring back the old MC. Instead of trying to become strong, rich, and cruel. Solve his problem with his mother and aunt first. Dont prolong this kind of conflict, its just cringe. If u r asking me what would i do in mc situations? I would face them directly, keep pestering them to apologize sincerely. If its still doesnt work, leave them. Why would i wasting my time with them. Life must go on bruh.

Shooting_Star
Shooting_StarAuthorShooting_Star

What I mean to be realistic isn't the incest part, but the reaction when they find out the XT is cheating on them. to be honest, I regret including incest content in this novel. I added incest because incest was popular before I made this novel. Sigh... at least it's not 100% incest because he is Hung Chen, not Xiao Tian. LOL that's why I want to finish this novel as soon as possible, so that I can start the new one again that's for you. not all readers think like what you think. did you skip the part when I explain why he decide to hide his identity? he didn't hide his identity just to get close to LXX again, but to protect him and his company friend, if I make lovey-dovey moment in every chapter, this novel will never be finished later. I need to move it to the plot so that I can finish this novel.

Yo_Man:U r joking right? Bruh if this realistic, there would never be a harem. And incest with your mother and your aunt thats just impossible. Yes, for me MC become like a loser. Why would you hiding your identity just so you can get to close to your suppose to be loved one? Thats just stalking. He's a man alright, MC always try to find a reason to leave them alone, cause he's afraid. Cmon author i still like your story but please bring back the old MC. Instead of trying to become strong, rich, and cruel. Solve his problem with his mother and aunt first. Dont prolong this kind of conflict, its just cringe. If u r asking me what would i do in mc situations? I would face them directly, keep pestering them to apologize sincerely. If its still doesnt work, leave them. Why would i wasting my time with them. Life must go on bruh.
MielnVic30
MielnVic30Lv6MielnVic30

wkwkwk, i know what you feel man, at first i thought this story is just happy go lucky MC to get women and bang then, well at that time i just read the chapter at the time when it's out... And then when the MC start talking about killing some women and then use her to get revenge on some guy, well that when i think this novel not gonna be some happy go lucky MC anymore and the story are gonna become a bit more complicated, and then i start reading them in batch (when the novel get 20 chapter, then i Will read it)....... And when the story get more complicated like this time, well i just read them when the chapter goes around 200-300 chapter and then i Will read it....... So my sugestion is just read the novel when it have enough chapter so you Will not get trigger..... because i too don't really like when the MC taking to long just to fix the problem, and then when the problem still not fixed the author just dump another problem to the MC.......... just read another novel when you wait this novel get more chapter to read....and there are a lot of novel that have the same tag like this novel well minus incest...... well anyway in my opinion this novel still worth it to read because not many novel that have tag incest in the tag got premium, because most of them just get droped.... so author please don't drop this novel and keep update the story, and good job at writing this novel........

J_S_2998
J_S_2998Lv3J_S_2998

As far as readers want everything to be perfect, life is hard enough as it is so many people read stories to escape or take their mind off everyday life. So they don’t like a lot of drama in the stories they read or if there is drama hopefully there is not much and it doesn’t take long to resolve. I know I really enjoyed the incest aspect of the story and the happy and sweet romance aspects of the story. I havent had money for chapters lately so I havent gotten to the part where the MC gets caught cheating, etc. I hope the story doesn’t get too dramatic and dark as I was reading it for the happy and romantic stuff. I prefer my harem stories where the MC’s dont lose any girls and they’re all able to be together and live together with a happy ending. Hopefully it works out for the MC and all his women and doesn’t end up where he has to leave any of them or any of them leave him, as I wanted him, his mom, aunt, and everyone else to be able to stay together. Now I’m nervous, it sounds like a lot has happened since I was last able to read.

Shooting_Star:Sigh.... just because it's a story, many readers want everything to be perfect. I really dont get this train of thought. this is a realistic story so I wanted to make it as realistic as possible. what is wrong with begging for love? XT loves her, so of course, he often wants to explain everything to her. you should think in her place too. have you never loved someone? if you do, you will understand his feeling. Now, let me ask you something, what will you do if you know your lover is cheating on you? I know that the conflict is taken too long without any resolution, but it's for the plot. I can finish it in one chapter, but the story won't move forward later. all this time, I only made a lovey-dovey moments and I want to focus on story now. sigh.....