I didn't read that far because I can't get over this names. I guess it's alright if you are not German but unfortunately I am. This names are a jumbled mess of German words, just a few examples of the first three chapters: Kraftvoll = powerfull Hund von Schwert = Dog of/from Sword (the heck xD) Rosa Fraulein Wunderschonen = Pink/Rose Miss Beautiful Even though the the story might be great I can't continue, my apologies.
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