Review Detail of kemo_omer in Heavenly Saga

I've read the first few chapters and I got to tell you all that the high rating of this novel is not as high as the quality of the novel itself. This must be the author's first novel, so I don't blame him for it being so bad!! anyway, here are some tips to the author- the mc has zero background and is supposed to five years old, yet sometimes he's smart and other times he's childish as ****. the side character are not well written either. there is no world building and we are introduced to the big shot characters in the first few chapters. there are many other mistakes that I didn't mention that also need to be fixed, but I don't have the time to list them all.