Review Detail of AutumnSolstice13 in Heavenly Saga

Hi Author, I just started reading your story and I would like to share some of the things I noticed in your novel. I think the story is really fast-paced and lacks the build up of the world and the character that is needed. I hope that the progression of the story would be a bit more enticing as your idea is amazing as the chapters felt rushed and boring. All the Best! xo