Review Detail of MJSB in Hanma Yujiru's Story :The Strongest Creature

I shamelessly rate my story! it will be interesting for sure! Keep wait people! I hope it will be good! I will now announced that it will not be a perfect fanfic Because its my first time really writing I will be sorry now if i make mistakes And i will not afraid of criticism And free to suggest me what i should improve. Thank you!that all for now!